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Nitpicks first: First of all, break up your paragraphs! Those two walls of text would usually turn the reader away immediately. When I look in the mirror, I see a ...

Banned for having green text in the signature.

I prefer Calibri after I switched to Microsoft Word 2007. I don't know, it just looks nicer and has more substance than most of the other fonts. D:

Nope. The person below me plays piano.

Read-along comments: even though it he felt Take out 'it' from the first sentence. The only sound was coming from him. It was the gun in his hand, as he ...

Hmm... I guess if you plan your chapters through outlines and such, then titles and chapter names shouldn't be much of a huge concerns. I think it's okay to name ...

Banned for have 87 reviews.

Read-as-I-go comments: England docks. 2167 AD. 11:51 Pm I think you should reconsider some punctuations in this opening. And is the setting really called 'England docks'? Or is it a ...

Okay, nitpicks first: Doubtlessly there would be ways to keep himself occupied. There should be a comma after 'doubtlessly'. It's needle sharp point glistened in the artificial light. It should ...

Thanks for your review! I guess I'll just go through the dialogues again. As for Syvyllieux, it's actually not as hard as it seems. XD For those who are interested ...

Hello, would you be so kind to review the opening of my novel? Thanks in advance. :) The link:

Granted, for it came a long time ago. I wish that you will have two wishes.

Nitpicks first: Agian. It's 'again'. I have had the same vivid, reoccuring nightmare since I had turned sixteen, nine months ago. Not to be mean, but there are quite a ...

Project Fugato I finally started to 'attempt' writing my novel. D: It took me quite a while to plan, and I am still not quite clear on where this story ...

Banned for having 106 reviews.